Audience feedback on first cut

We are looking at audience feedback in order to gain an insight into what people think we might need to change. We showed our opening to a group of year 13's and asked for their opinion.

After having received the feedback we were able to make adjustments to our opening:

1. Got rid of the burnt toast scene - we originally put this into shadow events in the future, unfortunately it didn't particularly achieve this effect so we decided to withdraw it.
2. Changed the Eviction scene, as the camera bag was left in the shot on our first cut, re-filming the stairs scene
3. Changed the redundancy scene - as the camera was letter-boxed 
4. Changed the ending where the protagonist wakes up to be a quick selection of shots flashing across the screen.